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Offline Ghettomath
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War-Inspired Story Post
« on: March 16, 2003, 04:42:49 AM »
Sometimes in impending-catastrophic events the best way to deal with whats to come is to write it down.  Thats what I do.  This is just a short story I wrote the other night after watching the news.  Feel free to post any critiques or work of your own.

-I could die from a nuclear explosion.  At ground-zero I would be decimated.  My body would vaporize.  My genetics would vanish.  I could die from being in the bomb\'s radius.  The wake would peel my skin and muscle tissues away in slow motion.
-I could die in a dark green uniform.  A bullet could rip through my jacket--right at the breast pocket where my last name is inscribed in hasty, gold sticthing.  I\'d fall face first into the dry and foreign soil.
-I could die from malnutrition in a basement where I must be quarantined to the the fact the world outside is so mine-laden and bomb-beaten is less safe.  I could watch my heart stop beating through the skin-covered ribs of my chest
-I could die in a helicopter-malfunction.  My final thoughts chopped and broken by the sound of the blades.
-I could die in a protest that, fueld by anger and agression, shifts into a riot.
-I could waste away and die of old age in my wheelchair--my two legs cut at the knee and wrapped in constantly oozing bandages.
-I could go insane, gunshots and death-cries ringing in my ears.  The hammer click and the bullet that entered my own head would sound no different than the others.
-I could die alone, bed-ridden and too tired of wondering where my family, friends, and country have gone.
-I could die.
-Or I could live.

Thanks for taking the time to read guys.
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War-Inspired Story Post
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2003, 11:41:11 AM »
-I could die in a routine training exercise for preparation for the war.
-I could die from a bullet ripping through my body with my last thoughts of the woman I love.
-I could be attacked by gas and die a agonizing death, coughing up pieces of my lungs.
-I could be shot down by a SAM flying an attack helicopter.
-I could get the next Gulf War syndrome and die insane.
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