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Offline videoholic

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OK, so what do you think this means?
« on: September 24, 2003, 06:35:55 PM »
I wrote a bit before about my cousin.  
http://www.psx2central.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=31223

Well, I found out his little brother writes poetry.

OK.  He\'s 15.  What can you tell me from this?  Not talking about grammar here and I am being serious.  What does this tell you?


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Try walking in my shoes for just one day, then tell me would you still think of me the same way? Its like a race, a contest, a battle to see who can kill me first of tourment and embarassment. Some day I will disappear, disappear without a fu**ing trace, disappear, unzip my skin and leave it here so you can just watch me be no one again. Somtimes these shoes dont feel right in my head, like a book, one that cant be read. Your dead in my life, my thoughts, my dreams, your no more, gone, out of my hair, this is no fair! My dream is for you to get out of my head, all I ever hear is bitching, all i think about is you! I HATE IT! JUST LEAVE ME ALONE! You\'ll never step foot in my space again. There is just somthing about you that bothers me, but it bothers me in such a hannis way. I dont understand why, Why I havnt ever felt these feelings before, why did this happen to me, why did I get these fellings! I will disappear, disappear without a fu**ing trace, disappear, unzip my skin and leave it here so you can just watch me be no one again. Its funny how you think everythink is perfect, but oh how you are so wrong. Life isnt just a game and neither am I so stop playing around and get a grip. You only have one life, why waste it on trying to f**k up mine? I dont want to have to deal with you, out up with you or fight with you anymore. Its a waste of my time. I will disappear, disappear without a fu**ng trace, disappear, unzip my skin and leave it here so you can just watch me be no one again.
I wear a necklace now because I like to know when I\'m upside down.
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« Reply #1 on: September 24, 2003, 07:35:14 PM »
Columbine part deux

Or it could be that he see\'s himself as the ever popular tormented outsider, and is writing this down because it\'s the stereotypical thing "his kind" does.

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« Reply #2 on: September 24, 2003, 08:17:17 PM »
It looks like he feels unimportant. Like if he died he wouldn\'t be missed. No one loves him or appreciates him. He wants to feel loved and needed and people don\'t even notice his pain.

Give old boy a hug or something.
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« Reply #3 on: September 24, 2003, 08:23:38 PM »
Definately has self-esteem issues... Maybe cousin Viddy should buy him a big screen TV and make him happy.

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« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2003, 08:38:34 PM »
or a hooker, I\'m serious.  Get him laid, and watch the happy poetry come rolling in.

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« Reply #5 on: September 24, 2003, 10:28:15 PM »
Let me save some one other from saying it:

TEEN ANGST!!!!1111
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAPETIME!
(thanks Chizzy!)

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« Reply #6 on: September 24, 2003, 11:29:46 PM »
Someone call a record label, we have a potential hit.....

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« Reply #7 on: September 25, 2003, 12:47:13 AM »
I think it\'s time to confiscate his copy of GTA Vice City.

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« Reply #8 on: September 25, 2003, 02:46:06 AM »
Well it seems like he feels alone, and that there are people trying to make his life miserable... Also sounds like theres too much drama between him and another person, and that what it\'s really about. How he doesn\'t wanna deal with that person anymore. *nods*
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« Reply #9 on: September 25, 2003, 06:49:43 AM »
I was kind of wondering if these were partial lyrics to something.

He feels love from his mom.  Major love.  His brother, the one I spoke of earlier does love him, but he treats everyone like shit and his brother is certainly no exception.

He is really not bright in any way shape or form.  I\'m actually surprised by what he wrote and some of the words he used.  I really think this may not be his work.  If any of you recognize any of it or know of a good search engine where you can search a few of the words in a string it may very well turn up as copied.
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TheOmen speaking of women: \"they\'re good at what they do, for what they are.\"
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« Reply #10 on: September 25, 2003, 06:53:22 AM »
STAIND:

Blow Away

live in my head for just one day
i see myself andlook away
the road is showing now on my face
soon i\'ll disappear
disappear without a ****ing trace

[chorus]

faces that i\'ve seen turn old and grey
i\'ve lost too many freinds along the way
memories i never thought would fade
they fade and blow away

i wish that icould disappear
unzip my skin and leave it here
so i could be no one again
and never let nobody,
i\'d let nobody
i\'d never let nobody in

[chorus]

so now the walls are closing in
because in life you sink or swim
sometimes these shoes don\'t feel right in my head
feel like a book that can\'t be read,
a book that can\'t be,
a book that can\'t be read

[chorus]


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« Reply #11 on: September 25, 2003, 07:07:31 AM »
OK, so that is where he got the Unzip my skin part of it.  I bet the other parts are out there too.
I wear a necklace now because I like to know when I\'m upside down.
 kopking: \"i really think that i how that guy os on he weekend\"
TheOmen speaking of women: \"they\'re good at what they do, for what they are.\"
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« Reply #12 on: September 25, 2003, 07:12:26 AM »
Yah, it\'s extremely derivitive of a lot of lyrical styles out there.

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« Reply #13 on: September 25, 2003, 11:47:07 AM »
oh god that was written by a professional? I thought it was alright for a kid but... jeez...
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« Reply #14 on: September 25, 2003, 12:03:39 PM »
(1) Teen angst - it\'s such a lovely thing.

(2) That is not poetry. That is a hodge-podge of popular , "tormented outsider" lyrics, stolen from other bands.

(3) Aw, a cry for help.

(4) Of course, I can\'t say we can blame him, when his own family says on the internet that he really that "bright".

 

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