OK, so what do you think this means?

I wrote this because of my sexual frustration :


Workin like a dog for the bossman
Workin for de company
I\'m bettin on the dice I\'m tossin
I\'m gonna have a fantasy
But where am I gonna look?
They tell me that love is blind
I really need a girl like an open book
To read between the lines

Love in an elevator
Livin it up when I\'m goin down
Love in an elevator
Lovin it up til I hit the ground

Jacki\'s in the elevator
Lingerie, second floor
She said "Can I see you later
And love you just a little more?"
I kinda hope we get stuck
Nobody gets out alive
She said "I\'ll show you how to fax in the mailroom honey
And have you home by five"

Love in an elevator
Livin in up when I\'m goin down
Love in an elevator
Lovin it up til I hit the ground


well there\'s more but you get the drift



Brad

***yes I know they are the lyrics of Aerosmith\'s Love in an Elevator

Originally posted by Bobs_Hardware
That\'s probably a good thing.  I mean, no offense to SwifDi, but look at some of the lame, contrived and just plain nonsensical things he said in an attempt to rhyme his sentences.  Hell, some of them don\'t even rhyme properly.

Yeah... "Heart" and "far" was a stretch...

Me personally, I like poems that rhyme because it delivers such a better rhythm when reading it, keeps it interesting.

I admit it wasn\'t a masterpiece, but what was important was the person I wrote it for loved it.

Originally posted by Spudz
Here is a poem I wrote:

Eat the babies
They taste like veil

Eat them always
Through Snow, Thunder, Wind and hail

Babies taste good
With barbecueque sauce

They are scrumptious
When they rot with moss

I love eating babies
I love eating babies



Actually I just made that up.

thats going in my AIM profile

here\'s something I whipped up;

Desert loving in your eyes all the way
If I listen to your lies would you say
I\'m a man without conviction , I\'m a man who doesn\'t know
How to sell a contradiction , you come and go, you come and go
Karma karma karma karma karma chameleon
You come and go, you come and go
Loving would be easy if your colors were like my dream
Red gold and green , red gold and green
Don\'t hear your wicked words every day
And you used to be so sweet , I heard you say
That my love was an addiction , when we cling our love is strong
When you go you\'re gone forever , you string along , you string along

Why does everyone think poetry has to rhyme?

When a poem rhymes, it gets stuck in your head, and you say it to others. Usually its more catchy.

thats going in my AIM profile

[Bobs_Hardware]

Originally posted by Spudz
When a poem rhymes, it gets stuck in your head, and you say it to others. Usually its more catchy.

Yah, it\'s fine if it\'s catchy.  But when talentless people try to do it, it just sounds cringe-worthy.

Hey... suck my dick.

[SirMystiq]

I\'ll make one up right ...now!!

There is a fly in my room;
It\'s going around and around;
All im hearing is zooom, zoom, zoom;
It\'s so big it must weight a pound;
Im sitting here writing some gay thing;
I cant concentrate with all the buzzing;
It went away I dont hear it no more;
it must of died or flew out the door;
ohh no its back again and now im simply bored;
I have a poem about random things;
so much money in my wallet when i open it up it goes ka-ching;

......grr im sleepy im going to sleep

here\'s another one I just made up;

You put the boom - boom into my heart
You send my soul sky high when your lovin\' starts
Jitterbug into my brain
Goes a bang - bang - bang \'til my feet do the same
But something\'s bugging you
Something ain\'t right
My best friend told me what you did last night
Left me sleepin\' in my bed
I was dreaming, but I should have been with you instead.

Wake me up before you go - go
Don\'t leave me hanging on like a yo - yo
Wake me up before you go - go
I don\'t want to miss it when you hit that high
Wake me up before you go - go
\'Cause I\'m not plannin\' on going solo
Wake me up before you go - go
Take me dancing tonight
I wanna hit that high

[SirMystiq]

^^^

THAT\'S A SONG!!

I down remember who sings it though...

[Bobs_Hardware]

Originally posted by SwifDi
Hey... suck my dick.

Hey, you probably don\'t need me to do it, while you\'re writing your lady poems like that.



Lame, sure.  But sweet..

I want to reproduce on your face.

[Kurt Angle]

Moving on the floor now babe you\'re a bird of paradise .
Cherry ice cream smile I suppose it\'s very nice
With a step to your left and a flick to the right
You catch that mirror way out west
You know you\'re something special and you look like you\'re the best .
Her name is Rio and she dances on the sand .
Just like that river twisting through a dusty land .
And when she shines she really shows you all she can
Oh Rio Rio dance across the Rio Grande .
I\'ve seen you on the beach and I\'ve seen you on T.V.
Two, of a billion stars , it means so much to me
Like a birthday or a pretty view
But then I\'m sure that you know it\'s just for you
Hey now (wow), look at that. Did he really run you down ?
At the end of the drive , the lawmen arrive you make me feel
alive alive alive
I\'ll take my chance \'cause luck is on my side
I tell you something I know what you\'re thinking
I tell you something , I know what you\'re thinking
Her name is Rio and she dances on the sand
Just like that river twists across a dusty land .
And when she shines she really shows you all she can.
Oh Rio Rio dance across the Rio Grande
Her name is Rio she don\'t need to understand
I might find her if I\'m looking like I can
Oh Rio Rio hear them shout across the land
From mountains in the North down to the Rio Grande

[videoholic]

Originally posted by SirMystiq
^^^

THAT\'S A SONG!!

I down remember who sings it though...

Young whipper snappers.  The current generation just doesn\'t know how great music use to be..

Wham!